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You had been with Scotland for three months now, and you'd been sick with a sore throat and a cough for one month of it. "Will you ever quit smoking?" You asked him, voice hoarse.

Scotland shrugged. "Depends, lassy. How badly do ye want me to stop?" He asked you, putting his arm around you and taking the cigar out of his mouth for a minute.

"Pretty badly." You said. You didn't mind the fact that he smoked, it was the fact that you got the worst of it, especially when he got too close. "What can I do to make you stop?" You asked him, crossing your arms and looking up into his green eyes with your (Eye Color) ones.

"(Name), lassy, ye gotta figure it out on yer own." Scotland replied and lightly kissed your forehead. "Now I've got a meetin' to attend to, so bye." He said with a final kiss on your cheek and leaving your house.

You sighed and plopped down on the couch, picking up the left box of cigars. "I know how I'm going to get him to stop!" You said with a smirk and took one cigar out, then threw the box away and covered it with more trash. "Away I go~!" You trilled to yourself and left with the cigar in your pocket. You ran all the way to a very familiar large house and knocked on the door, a short, happy tune.

Finland came to the door and smiled at her. "(Name)! What a surprise! Are you looking for Norway? I'll go get him." He said and went off to find your Norwegian friend.

You smiled and put your hands in your pockets, playing with the cigar in the left one. While you waited you hummed a little Celtic tune you picked up from Scotland when he was singing when he thought you weren't there. Little did he know that you listened every time he started the beautiful song.

Norway came to the door and smiled a little at the sight of you. "Hallo, (Name). What do you need?" He asked curiously and leaned on the door.

"I need help with a special effect to make Scotland stop smoking." You said with a smirk. "Can you help me?" Norway nodded and you smiled brighter. "Great! Come with me then! We're going to Scotland's meeting!"

*Paul the Time-Skip Beatle is here to escort you through the Time-Skip*

Scotland sighed and sat down at England's dinner table. He puffed out a bit of smoke and closed his eyes. "What's takin' ye so long, brother?" He asked impatiently. "I have a girlfriend waitin' on me ye know." He added.

"Just wait a tick!" England snapped back. "I'm almost done!" He said and came into the dining room. "Ireland got sick again so he couldn't make it, and Wales just didn't want to come." He sat down with a heavy sigh. "And would you please stop smoking?!"

Scotland shook his head and puffed out another bit of smoke. "Well, what did ye want to talk about?" He asked and heard the door click open. "Is that Wales?" He asked.

"No, it's me. You forgot something at my house." You said as you entered the dining room, the cigar in your mouth. Norway stayed in the living room, casting a spell to make the cigar look lit when it wasn't. "I can see why you don't want to quit." You said and puffed out some fake smoke.

Scotland felt his eyes open wider and he put out his cigar and stood up. "Fine I'll quit! Just take that outta yer mouth, lassie!" He said.

You laughed and took the cigar out of your mouth, then threw it away. "Thanks again, Norway. You're a great help." You said and Norway nodded, then left. You turned back to Scotland and gave him a kiss. "I finally cured you of your smoking problem!"

"Yes ye did, lassie, yes ye did."
Well, I think this is pretty good, but I'd like some feedback, what did YOU think of this story? Let me know!

I don't own you or Scotland, Himaruya does!

EDIT: Whoa! 48 favorites already?! Man, I love you guys so much!
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5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Yay! I'm so proud of myself XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! Be proud of yourself! XD
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5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Yay! XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes! XD
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5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Haha! XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol XD
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5NinjaCat Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Haha XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yus! XD
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thenekwitch Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
You SURE he stopped?? XD Now I auh everytime I go by the cigar shop!! I bet Ireland "got sick." >}
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I'm positive! XD Haha nice lol oh yes, he "got sick." XD
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thenekwitch Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
XXD Kessesse!! Yeeeah... Plotting with Republic Of Ireland...? >} Maybe with Wales?
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yess >D
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thenekwitch Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
HEhehe... Whats awesome is that I just found out I'm also Welsh! Take THAT England!! All Kirkland!! ... Dammit, I hate myself. Oh well... Cuuuurses... >} I can hear N. Ireland calling England. "*cough cough* Hey, stupid-I mean little bro, I'm real sick and cant *cough cough HACK!* make it to the meeting." To Wales and R. Of Ireland "Lets do it. >}"
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HA xDDDD
You come up with the oddest things XD
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thenekwitch Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Hehehe... I know. ;3 Just one of those things... Oil and water. XXD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha XD Wonderful
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Rina-san28 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's the best smoking addiction cure I've ever seen! I might have to suggest that to my friend for her dad!
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Right?! That would be awesome if it worked!
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iLAUGHatEVERYTHING Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist
GGAAAAAHHHHHHH THE KAWAAIIINESSSSS!!!! That an 'Good Job' in the language Weeaboo
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~!
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DementedlyMe Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Paul? Timeskip Beatle?





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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yess~

Haha
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LenPwnsLyn Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student
So cute~ :iconloveloveplz:
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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LenPwnsLyn Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student
Chuu welcome~ :meow:
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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OldRivalShipper411 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
That was so funny! I loved it x)
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you loved it~
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xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahahahahha~ I would so do that! XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:highfive: Yes! Me too!
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Ririsu-san Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
I'm so sure england laughed his ass off.
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure he did too
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Ririsu-san Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
yup
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
if I was England and I saw this I would laughed my ass off XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would too XD
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
XD
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup XD
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MikeyWaysStalker Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
At the end I ended up laughing my ass off! :XD:
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad I could make you laugh!
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fallenangelrawr Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconiloveitplz:Great! I thought you were gonna put a spell on his cigars and he'd use it and be like ewww lol
But great change you did there! <3
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
Haha yeah well that's what I was originally planning to do, but the one I used was a lot better to me ^^
I'm glad you liked it~
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Squashini-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Clever! Love the plot twist! :iconiloveitplz:
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! It popped into my head and I just had to write it~
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Squashini-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm glad you did! :iconcutiesmileplz:
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad I did too~! ^^
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princessbutterfly53 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Tehe how cute!!!! Scotland quit smoking just cuz Reader-chan looked like she was smoking hahaha how funny yet cute at the same time!
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~! I'm glad you like it~!
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princessbutterfly53 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Your welcome~ I did not just like it i loved it!
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AmberTheAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbowplz: Well I'm glad you love it~
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princessbutterfly53 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Yes i love it a lot, it is very cute and funny ^_^
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